a drafted storyline : by angeline and deirdre

Deirdre and I randomly made up this storyline. It's very weird 'cos we were basically just trying to link up the charcters we thought up during drama today. Anyway, we hope all of you can give comments on the story and give us suggestions so we can edit it. Thanks guys!!! XD


Michael is a quiet little guy who keeps to himself. He is the brother of Joshua, but they are not very close. Due to something Joshua's grandfather, Agong, did to him when he was young, Joshua developed a split personality. However, he doesn't know about his split personality. Only Michael and Agong know about it.

Joshua is very popular and good-looking, well-liked by his peers in his school. This is why, when Michael tries to tell Joshua'a friends about his split personality to protect them from him, they don't believe him. They start to ostracise him and tell their friends that he is crazy. He feels lonely and sad, shutting himself away from the rest of the world. Slowly, Michael loses all his friends.

One day, a girl called Isabel transfers to his school. She is told almost immediately about Michael and his crazy stories. Unlike the others, however, Isabel believes him. She approaches him and tries to make friends with him. Drawn by her bright and optimistic personality, Michael begins to confide in her and only her. He tells her about how he has to tell everyone about Joshua's split personality to protect them and how nobody believes him. Isabel then tries to help Michael.

First, Isabel goes her friend, Alyssa, to get her to believe Michael's side of the story. Alyssa is the sister of Audrey, who is Joshua's girlfriend. Alyssa believes Isabel and goes to tell her sister, Audrey. But Audrey doesn't believe her. She thinks Michael is just trying to hurt Joshua's reputation because of their sibling rivalry.

Frustrated, Alyssa goes to her other friend, Darren. Darren is from another school, but he knows a lot of people from Alyssa's school. He is skeptical of Alyssa's story at first. However, one day he witnesses the evil side of Joshua's personality himself. Usually Agong would prod Joshua with his walking stick everytime Joshua succumbed to his evil side. The one time he missed it, however, Darren saw it. From then on, Darren believes Michael's story.

Darren comes to Alyssa's school one day and tries to help Michael, Isabel and Alyssa convince Audrey about Joshua and his split personality. Audrey still remains completely loyal to Joshua, so they decide to find the trigger to Joshua's split personality. They manage to find it and sucessfully convince Audrey.

Now that everyone, including Audrey, believes that he has a split personality, Joshua cannot just ignore the possibility. All the characters come together to help Joshua realise his split personality and help him overcome it.


This is what we've done so far. It's pretty vague since we only tried to link the characters...the plot might also be too long...and the main topics didn't show much...ARGH NEVER MIND just pretty please give comments so we can improve on it. Thanks much! :)